Last time I shared six sentences from a work-in-progress, the next Shades of Night story I have been working on. This week, I have decided to share six sentences from my paranormal thriller novel, Shadow House, which has been picking up an increasing amount of attention lately.
Here are my six sentences:
Patricia led Scott into a bedroom that was one of the smaller rooms. Patricia did not actually walk into the room, and in the moment before Scott set foot inside the room he understood why. His nose was assaulted with a stench that smelled like stale urine. Scott looked down at the brown carpeting, which was splotchy with stains of all types as if a battle had taken place in that very room. There were scratches in the pink and white teddy bear wallpaper, scarring deep into the plaster underneath. Some of the scratches were so deep the studs underneath the plaster were exposed and ravaged as well.
6 comments:
Damn! My skin's crawling. Great job!
Methinks Patricia is smarter than Scott. This is one of those 'get the hell outta there' moments and I'm waiting for the door to slam. ;)
Yikes, sounds like something bad (and big) was in there!
Wendy, thank you. I love to hear when someone reads my book and stays up all night with all the lights on.
Monica, I agree with you, but if you read more of the book you find Scott does not believe in hauntings and why. If he were smart Scott also would not have bought the house and lived there alone.
Yowza, not a nice room! Very effective description.
Angelaquarles, glad I have you thinking what could have happened.
Jessica, thank you.
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